The leprechaun in my bedroom

安妮在学校写的,放假了就带回了家,我们得以拜读她的第一个长篇小说。她说她大概花了一个星期来写这个故事。她自己也觉得用and太多。

There was a leprechaun living in sammamish,living in my bedroom in a mini tent. One day the leprechaun was having the breakfast.
The leprechaun came out after the great breakfast . She went on top of my drawer, and sat on my tissue box. I said: “how are you doing?” she said:”great!”

She walked on my hand and said:” sometimes I can trick you!” she gave me a big gold coin and said it’s for you. I asked :”do you want to be on my friend list?” “sure!” she said. So we will be friends!

“do you want to go outside and play?” “sure!” so she hopped on my hand and I got my bicycle and put her in the basket on my bicycle and rode off to the park.

We put out a vase with water and picked flowers until the vase was full, then I put the casein the basket and put the leprechaun in too and went on the street and back home.

I put the vase on the the table and said:”hi! Mom!” she said:”where we’re you?” “I was in the park with my bicycle, so I got this vase of flowers.”  I said. “it looks great!” she said. Then I gave her a drawing and said:”it’s for you!” and I hugged my mom and went to my room and starting to make a softer tent for my leprechaun. When I was finished, it had glitter that is gold and green and the tent was green, I cut out the door and wrote something and made a poster for her. My leprechaun went inside and sleeper every school, dinner, lunch, breakfast time.

I put some flowers in a vase and put it in her tent. It was a gift for her. After dinner I rang the bell to woke her up and said:” I put a toy tub with real water.” she took off her clothes and went inside the tub and I went to find shampoo and went back. I squeezed some on my hand and put it on her hair and started scrabbling and tilt a cup of water and she closed her eyes and I poured on her. I got a towel and a mat, she stepped on the soft mat and I gave her the towel and dried her hair and entire body and I put her clothes on and cut out a short blanket. It was night time and I gave her the smallest brush and toothpaste on it and took her to the bathroom and started to brush teeth. I got a toothbrush and put toothpaste on and started brushing and I helped her get the flossing string and flossed and I got back to my room and set her to the tent and I got to bed fast asleep, good night.

The next morning we woke up and had breakfast, it was milk and leprechaun cookies and cereal with milk. We ate breakfast, and then we went to the park. We went to the swings, he leprechaun fell off and I quickly caught her. We went to the slide, and the leprechaun stayed with me. I brought my bike, it had a little basket with no holes, so the leprechaun won’t fall.
I put the leprechaun into the basket, and rode my bike home. It was a short way home and we got home in time for lunch.

I went inside, my mom asked :”where have you been?” I said:” I went to the park.” my mom said ” you got here in time.  Here is lunch, guess what? You get here just in time!” I gave the leprechaun a little piece of bread for lunch, it was a great lunch, I ate.

Soon it was play time, I wiped the leprechaun’s face to clean it after lunch, it was a great play time after all.

Soon it was dinner time, so we ate a lot and went in my room and made a awesome cool hideout. It was a large hideout to sleep in. The night soon my mother went up the stairs. She called me to brush my teeth for bed. Then I brushed my teeth and leprechaun’s teeth. We took off our clothes and closed the door. The leprechaun went into her bed and fell asleep.

THE END.

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